Wednesday, 5 August 2015

New Class Challenge

Welcome to Team Palmer! Here's your first challenge:


Use adjectives and your senses to write an interesting sentence about this picture. Can you use a simile too?

52 comments:

  1. As I was walking down the dark, damp street I saw this light that was flashing like fireworks.

    From Hajira

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  2. As I was walking down the haunted,dark street I see a figure as I'm coming towards it I see a spooky house as black as a ware wolf.

    By fariah

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    1. As l was walking down the dark and scary ally people were running down as fast as a blink. Ryan

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  3. As I wandered down the street , candles flickered like fire works bursting in the midnight sky.

    Callum






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  4. As I was walking up an old,rusty,black stair case.I felt as if I was in a haunted mansion from the minute I was in there.

    Anoushka

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    1. Well done Anoushka for using rusty

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    2. Nice sentence Anoushka you 've used a lot of good adjectivets try using some simile .

      Callum, Bobby

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  5. The attractive light flickers like fire works in the attractive night sky.


    Imani

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    1. I like the word attractive - try not to use a word twice.

      Mrs Palmer

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    2. I really like your sentence especially the simile

      From fariah

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    3. Well done imani that was great

      By poppy

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    4. i like the word attractive night sky and fire workes

      Mehaq ,Georgina

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    5. Instead of using attractive twice you could of used a different word such as eye-catching or you could use a simile like as dark as a bats wing.

      Jessica O'shea

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  6. When I was walking down the dark damp street I saw a flash of lightning that went quicker than my blink

    Bobby

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    1. I like how you did your work

      From sophie

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    2. Good Bobby i like the way you said quicker than my blink.

      Ben

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    3. Well done Bobby good sentence It could do with a couple more adjectives though.😀

      Callum

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    4. I like dark damp street.

      Georgina ,mehaq

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  7. The light flickered in the dark near the haunted house.

    Mehaq ,Georgina

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  8. The dirty , haunted house is dark like night

    From sophie

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  9. The lantern flashes like golden,glitter sparkling in the shining sunlight .

    Zak

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  10. On the dark and damp street the light flickered in a blink of an eye

    Anaborhi

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    1. I like how you said in a blink of an eye :)

      Ben

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  11. When I was walking down the street and I saw the home and light was like lams

    From Chloe

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  12. The light flickers like a firework in the sky.

    Chloe A

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  13. As I was walking down the deep,dark street the lamppost flickers in front of me wildly.It was as dark as liquorice.

    Ben

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  14. The shinning sparkle light is like burning,hot lit with one flame in the cold,spooky air.

    By Poppy

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    1. I really like your sentence because of all the adjective you have used to describe the light.
      From Fariah

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  15. As I walked down the dark black ally,I saw a attractive light it was like I was in heaven.

    Boe

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  16. As the dim light flickered in the darkness, I creped up the unstable moss covered steps
    to my cousins house. I looked through the window and saw...
    The Queen. I couldn't believe my eyes.

    by Jessica O'shea

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  17. The light flickered in the haunted house,I saw people starting to run I could not believe my eyes

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  18. One dark night I was walking down the street and I saw a creepy man waving to me like it was a shadow.

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  19. While I walked down the dark damp street I saw a creepy looking house with moss and gasped as I saw a black figure darker than night.

    By: Adrian Nava

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  20. As I walked down the stairs I saw the faint light, shining as bright as a fireflies. The air felt cold as like as a freezer.

    The people were looking at the stars in the night sky. They smiled like they were hovering through the city.

    ( By The Awesome Nahum Cruz )

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  21. As I walk down the street a bright light was flickering as fast as a blink and as walked down the street I hear screaming coming from an abandoned building.
    by Matthew Miyata

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  22. as i was walking down the darkest street i saw a shadow and i ran because it came right at me and i ran like a tiger i was so scared finally i got home.

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  23. As i was walking down the dark,creepy,mysterious street.I saw a light flicking on and off.I heard a noise i started running.I made to my house.i fell asleep

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  24. As I was walking down the pitch black scary block. I saw a ghost and it was right behind me and I try not to scream and my friend was getting out of her house. Then suddenly she became invisible.

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  25. Staring deeply at the dark lighted staircase the flame shimmered and flickered as the midnight air held me. - Giselle

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  26. As I was walking down the pitch black I say a dim light as i got closer I got as scared as scary joe. Then I say the president with no body guards running as fast as he can.

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  27. One late dark night I was gonna go to see my friends but our parents didn't no so i snuck to see them and there mom walked outside with there dad and went to the store they didn't see me but that was close so I went in and we played games...

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  28. As I was walking down the street I see a old, black, rusty house. The light flickered in the night sky.

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  29. The house's light is as bright as the sun the moss as green as tree leaves the house as dark as space the house's windows as clear as a diamond.

    Rey

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  30. As I walk up the old broken stairs,the door blows open.I start to run....and I stop to catch my breathe.

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  31. When I walked down my neighborhood I saw a a dark house with steps covered with leaves with a dog as black as the midnight sky.

    By Martin Esquivel

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  32. As I walk up the old steps I heard foot step coming up behind me i turned around there was nothing at all. After that I got kinda scared and then lights started flickering on and off then I got really scared so I ran into my house and peeked out the window and nothing at all so I put my pjs on and watched a movie with my dog and i wasn't scared anymore.

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  33. It was a dark ,dark night.Suddenly a light flickered on like fire.As the light shown it uncovered a mossy staircase

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  34. As i was walking down the street each step i took made a creek sound.It was shallow like as it was as fogy as the snow.The lightning was as loud as there was shots.






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  35. As I was walking down the spooky street I passed by a ugly creepy house.

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  36. One night I saw this house and it had green moss. It was like vines that were wrapped around the house and they were old and dry.

    By: Ani

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  37. As I was walking up the sidewalk i saw a flashing light coming from a aparment that no one lived in so. As I walked down the street and entered the apartment I got scared so I took a deep breath and walked into a room. The door was closed so I only opened it a bit but all it was is people just bearly moving in.

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