As the dim light flickered in the darkness, I creped up the unstable moss covered steps to my cousins house. I looked through the window and saw... The Queen. I couldn't believe my eyes.
As I walk down the street a bright light was flickering as fast as a blink and as walked down the street I hear screaming coming from an abandoned building. by Matthew Miyata
as i was walking down the darkest street i saw a shadow and i ran because it came right at me and i ran like a tiger i was so scared finally i got home.
As i was walking down the dark,creepy,mysterious street.I saw a light flicking on and off.I heard a noise i started running.I made to my house.i fell asleep
As I was walking down the pitch black scary block. I saw a ghost and it was right behind me and I try not to scream and my friend was getting out of her house. Then suddenly she became invisible.
As I was walking down the pitch black I say a dim light as i got closer I got as scared as scary joe. Then I say the president with no body guards running as fast as he can.
One late dark night I was gonna go to see my friends but our parents didn't no so i snuck to see them and there mom walked outside with there dad and went to the store they didn't see me but that was close so I went in and we played games...
As I walk up the old steps I heard foot step coming up behind me i turned around there was nothing at all. After that I got kinda scared and then lights started flickering on and off then I got really scared so I ran into my house and peeked out the window and nothing at all so I put my pjs on and watched a movie with my dog and i wasn't scared anymore.
As i was walking down the street each step i took made a creek sound.It was shallow like as it was as fogy as the snow.The lightning was as loud as there was shots.
As I was walking up the sidewalk i saw a flashing light coming from a aparment that no one lived in so. As I walked down the street and entered the apartment I got scared so I took a deep breath and walked into a room. The door was closed so I only opened it a bit but all it was is people just bearly moving in.
As I was walking down the dark, damp street I saw this light that was flashing like fireworks.
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As I was walking down the haunted,dark street I see a figure as I'm coming towards it I see a spooky house as black as a ware wolf.
ReplyDeleteBy fariah
As l was walking down the dark and scary ally people were running down as fast as a blink. Ryan
DeleteAs I wandered down the street , candles flickered like fire works bursting in the midnight sky.
ReplyDeleteCallum
A lovely simile, Callum.
DeleteMrs Palmer
As I was walking up an old,rusty,black stair case.I felt as if I was in a haunted mansion from the minute I was in there.
ReplyDeleteAnoushka
Well done Anoushka for using rusty
DeleteNice sentence Anoushka you 've used a lot of good adjectivets try using some simile .
DeleteCallum, Bobby
The attractive light flickers like fire works in the attractive night sky.
ReplyDeleteImani
I like the word attractive - try not to use a word twice.
DeleteMrs Palmer
I really like your sentence especially the simile
DeleteFrom fariah
Well done imani that was great
DeleteBy poppy
i like the word attractive night sky and fire workes
DeleteMehaq ,Georgina
Instead of using attractive twice you could of used a different word such as eye-catching or you could use a simile like as dark as a bats wing.
DeleteJessica O'shea
When I was walking down the dark damp street I saw a flash of lightning that went quicker than my blink
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I like how you did your work
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Good Bobby i like the way you said quicker than my blink.
DeleteBen
Well done Bobby good sentence It could do with a couple more adjectives though.😀
DeleteCallum
I like dark damp street.
DeleteGeorgina ,mehaq
The light flickered in the dark near the haunted house.
ReplyDeleteMehaq ,Georgina
The dirty , haunted house is dark like night
ReplyDeleteFrom sophie
The lantern flashes like golden,glitter sparkling in the shining sunlight .
ReplyDeleteZak
On the dark and damp street the light flickered in a blink of an eye
ReplyDeleteAnaborhi
I like how you said in a blink of an eye :)
DeleteBen
When I was walking down the street and I saw the home and light was like lams
ReplyDeleteFrom Chloe
The light flickers like a firework in the sky.
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As I was walking down the deep,dark street the lamppost flickers in front of me wildly.It was as dark as liquorice.
ReplyDeleteBen
The shinning sparkle light is like burning,hot lit with one flame in the cold,spooky air.
ReplyDeleteBy Poppy
I really like your sentence because of all the adjective you have used to describe the light.
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As I walked down the dark black ally,I saw a attractive light it was like I was in heaven.
ReplyDeleteBoe
As the dim light flickered in the darkness, I creped up the unstable moss covered steps
ReplyDeleteto my cousins house. I looked through the window and saw...
The Queen. I couldn't believe my eyes.
by Jessica O'shea
The light flickered in the haunted house,I saw people starting to run I could not believe my eyes
ReplyDeleteOne dark night I was walking down the street and I saw a creepy man waving to me like it was a shadow.
ReplyDeleteWhile I walked down the dark damp street I saw a creepy looking house with moss and gasped as I saw a black figure darker than night.
ReplyDeleteBy: Adrian Nava
As I walked down the stairs I saw the faint light, shining as bright as a fireflies. The air felt cold as like as a freezer.
ReplyDeleteThe people were looking at the stars in the night sky. They smiled like they were hovering through the city.
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As I walk down the street a bright light was flickering as fast as a blink and as walked down the street I hear screaming coming from an abandoned building.
ReplyDeleteby Matthew Miyata
as i was walking down the darkest street i saw a shadow and i ran because it came right at me and i ran like a tiger i was so scared finally i got home.
ReplyDeleteAs i was walking down the dark,creepy,mysterious street.I saw a light flicking on and off.I heard a noise i started running.I made to my house.i fell asleep
ReplyDeleteAs I was walking down the pitch black scary block. I saw a ghost and it was right behind me and I try not to scream and my friend was getting out of her house. Then suddenly she became invisible.
ReplyDeleteStaring deeply at the dark lighted staircase the flame shimmered and flickered as the midnight air held me. - Giselle
ReplyDeleteAs I was walking down the pitch black I say a dim light as i got closer I got as scared as scary joe. Then I say the president with no body guards running as fast as he can.
ReplyDeleteOne late dark night I was gonna go to see my friends but our parents didn't no so i snuck to see them and there mom walked outside with there dad and went to the store they didn't see me but that was close so I went in and we played games...
ReplyDeleteAs I was walking down the street I see a old, black, rusty house. The light flickered in the night sky.
ReplyDeleteThe house's light is as bright as the sun the moss as green as tree leaves the house as dark as space the house's windows as clear as a diamond.
ReplyDeleteRey
As I walk up the old broken stairs,the door blows open.I start to run....and I stop to catch my breathe.
ReplyDeleteWhen I walked down my neighborhood I saw a a dark house with steps covered with leaves with a dog as black as the midnight sky.
ReplyDeleteBy Martin Esquivel
As I walk up the old steps I heard foot step coming up behind me i turned around there was nothing at all. After that I got kinda scared and then lights started flickering on and off then I got really scared so I ran into my house and peeked out the window and nothing at all so I put my pjs on and watched a movie with my dog and i wasn't scared anymore.
ReplyDeleteIt was a dark ,dark night.Suddenly a light flickered on like fire.As the light shown it uncovered a mossy staircase
ReplyDeleteAs i was walking down the street each step i took made a creek sound.It was shallow like as it was as fogy as the snow.The lightning was as loud as there was shots.
ReplyDeleteAs I was walking down the spooky street I passed by a ugly creepy house.
ReplyDeleteOne night I saw this house and it had green moss. It was like vines that were wrapped around the house and they were old and dry.
ReplyDeleteBy: Ani
As I was walking up the sidewalk i saw a flashing light coming from a aparment that no one lived in so. As I walked down the street and entered the apartment I got scared so I took a deep breath and walked into a room. The door was closed so I only opened it a bit but all it was is people just bearly moving in.
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